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  • What do you think of my poem?

    As I lay here bleeding

    I'm a whinging goth

    No one really likes me

    So I self harm and put my poetry on Yahoo

    I'm a whinging goth

    The blood is so warm and so cruel

    The devices you torture me with

    Are of my own making

    I'm a whinging goth

    If you could

    Would you help me

    To see the light

    Would you leave me here to rot?

    Am I just a whinging goth?

    These hamburgers I eat

    because there is no love

    I'm a whinging fat goth

    As I slice into my wrists

    I fall into unconsciousness

    And have nightmares of salad

    I'm a whinging fat goth

    People say my poetry has meaning

    It shows the darkness

    that they know is real

    They're a bunch of teenage idiots

    They say I should be a writer

    with a little more practice

    And no one tells me to shut my whining

    Strange...

    This is my glory and my downfall

    Is it not?

    I don't care

    I'm above you and below you.

    I'm all a f**king round you

    Like Jesus' love

    I surround you

    I'm every whinging fat goth

    Yet I stand alone,

    In a boring pome,

    With everything I've lost

    And I dream of a time

    when a verse will (or wont) rhyme

    I truly am annoying.

    Yes

    I

    Am.

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