Can you correct/improve my website? 10 Points for Best Answer!?

I suggest capitalizing the main words of certain titles, such as the "young" in "A young Asian Palm Civet", and "palm civet" in "What is an Asian palm civet?" Don't capitalize the "A" in the title at the top of the main page, unless it looks weird with it lowercase. Also, capitalize the main words in the section headings. Maybe put a border around the picture of the civet

1st paragraph 2nd sentence: "makes" should be changed to "make". The third and fourth sentences should be combined; it makes the paragraph flow more easily. The simplest way to combine sentences is with an "and". 7th sentence: change "that" with "which". Try to switch up the beginnings of the sentences instead of just using "it", and maybe use transition words so the sentences don't seem that choppy.

2nd paragraph 2nd sentence: rewrite. Because the "if not tamed" is at the end, it makes the sentence seem a little awkward. It usually is never a good idea to start a sentence with "but" because it makes the sentence sound like a fragment.

3rd paragraph 1st and 2nd sentence: replace "." with ";". Vietnam is one word, not two.

1st answer: put a space between the "A." and the "they" at the start of the first sentence.

2nd answer: find the minimum size of the cage and what the recommended cage size is. If you can't find anything on that, don' write "I think" because then the reader will leave your page. He or she will think that you don't know what you are talking about. 6th sentence: write the person has to clean the cage once a week or however many times it is. Don't write every week because that could mean multiple times to some people.

3rd answer 1st sentence: don't capitalize the "A" after the semicolon.

4th answer: don't rewrite what omnivorous means; the reader can remember from when you explained it before, or they can go back to the top and reread it.

9th answer: the 3rd and 4th sentences can be combined, as well as the 5th and 6th.

10th answer: rewrite the 2nd sentence so it isn't a fragment and it flows. The 3rd sentence sounds awkward; rewrite. Change "I" with "in". Combine the 4th and 5th sentences.

11th answer: take out the "but" in the 2nd sentence and just have "they" as your starting word for the sentence.

I like how you recapped what the person needs when they have a civet and what to feed them, but maybe put a title that says something like "in summary" (preferably a title that is more creative than that) because I got a little confused as to what you were talking about.

You did an overall great job, and congratulations on your website!