What do you think of my poem, "Why?"?

Boring boring boring

Very very nice. Nice metaphors. Nice syncopated rhythm (groove). Reminiscent of the Beat poets of yore. Something one of them might’ve read on the stage of one of those little offbeat coffee shops down in Greenwich Village in the late ‘50s to mid ‘60s. I dig it. Exceptional, actually. Yeah, although I was pretty young and maybe didn’t appreciate it as much as I did when I got older, I was actually alive during that era and in that particular metropolitan location,  so I know what the vibe was like back then. And how people interacted with one another. And appreciated things like what you’ve composed here. And it was much better in those days than it is nowadays I have to say. I guess because there were more people who expressed themselves in the way that you do. But yeah, you have some transcendent gifts there. I write a little bit myself so I think I’m pretty good at detecting writing chops when I see it. LOL. 

I love ‘as plain gibberish soothes.”  

 Not singing all keys is great usage. I like how it moves from twists to lines (juxtaposition of image)  Not connecting the doors and harmony but I’m ok with that.

It’s smart but colloquial.  I had to put on my Matthew mcconaughey voice.  

It's great.   

It is pretty good.

This poem is a tired soul

Drifting over salty seas

Too deafened by those raucous gulls

To hear the ocean breathe

the hustle

the bustle

and the sleaze

I will travel

the city

with ease

Out on top, but it's not the end

there is more to come, my friend

that was nice, you are good

you got more for me to read?