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LIANE =wisdom reload=
LIANE =wisdom reload= asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this poem? I need feedbacks.?

I have submitted a poem to peotry dot com almost three months ago. It was just one poem entitled "Heavenly Broken". By those three months, that poem have reached the "Editor's Choice" (which by the way out of the thousands of poem, only 12% are chosen for this), "one of the The Best Poem for 2007 Award" (including me for one of this year's best poets), and the semi-finalist award which is so great I still can't believe it.

The International Poetry Federation (as far as I remembered) was the committee on judging and I am reluctant to believe I, or my poem, deserve those awards.

You can read the poem here:

http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=...

And if possible, PLEASE RATE IT.

then give me feedbacks....

thanks..

Update:

UPDATE:

I stand corrected (by my own self). The title of the poem is "Heavily Broken".

I almost forgot the title. Arg!

Update 2:

UPDATE: Yes, they have also sent me the Editor's Choice multiply times. Thanks anyway for confirming me that the EC awards was completely bogus. But anyway, I guess the Semi-Finalists Award was real enough. And I mean real.

I would like to clarify that I'm not a poet writing with that so-called heart. Is was more of what I can call, "profound expressionism". Got it? Well, that's an opinion. I respect that.

Thanks for those who appreciated my poem and gave some time to look at it.

More feed backs please! And please rate my poem.

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  • Sunny P
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    10 points!

    I liked it.

  • RenBunny25
    1 decade ago

    Just some advice, the 12% thing is complete rubbish. Everyone I know who has posted a poem on there has received the Editors Choice multiple times. They just want you to pay money for memberships etc. Personally, I liked your poem.

  • becky_suttle
    1 decade ago

    I think this poem is OK but it gives me some feedbacks.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    It's kinda boring. No heart behind it. You just wanted to post something asap.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Wow! That's amazing! It is really powerful! you must have taken hours to write that. once again.... FANTASTIC!

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